Monday, 14 September 2020

Is It True Artificial Intelligence Will Take Over Our World?

today room 2 was using persuasive techniques to enhance our writing and hook people in

enjoyed self assessment because it made me think deeper about my learning. I found hooking people in very challenging because there is not a lot of WOW! stuff about artificial intelligence. this shurely shows how i'm a smart learner. 

No reira, tena koutou, te koutou, tena koutou katoa

Do you think artificial intelligence, aka AI, will take over the world? In this speech I will talk about security, unemployment, and the ways it can be made for good. Artificial intelligence is the 2nd worst problem (after covid 19) happening right now, even if we don't know it, it’s already controlling the human race’s actions. 


Firstly, security is a big problem, do you think it is the biggest? Google, Facebook, Snapchat, Instagram all of these are run by artificial intelligence. The second you click on a post there is a record of it and artificial intelligence will know more about you. Soon, it will know every single thing about you. AI can process your time spent on ads and turn it into data. Then, sell it to the company and then the company will pay to make them show more of those ads.


In addition, robot’s will end up doing our everyday jobs. will it be all of

them? There are already robots in our life, vacuum robots, lawn mower robots, and pool cleaning robots. We could be as active as cows!! Moo and they will be more creative then make more and better robots then they will blast us into oblivion, we may be extinct they will make games into work assignments this can’t happen!!


Finally if artificial robots were everywhere they would not need medicine so would we get sick and die? But you can make them do stuff to dangerous for humans, you still do the stuff only you can do especially police they can make sure it doesn't fall into the wrong hands                        


In conclusion there are only two possible ways to stop it from happening , I have shown three exclusive points on how we wont have any security, jobs or but we can make sure it's not going to be bad, it will always be an option.

Success Criteria:

Self Assessment ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€

I have used my first technique to enhance my writing

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I have used my second technique to enhance my writing

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I have used my third technique to enhance my writing

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Use at least three different (FEARRR) persuasive techniques in your writing.

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Active Reflection: 

My Reflection



What have I done well?



I have heaps of facts and opinions and rhetorical questions 





Next step:



I have not alot of emotive language and barely anything to hook the readers in




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