This week i've been learning how to hook the reader in. I aimed to use onomatopoeia (sound), dialouge (talking), short, sharp sentences and to describe the setting ( adjectives, similes and metaphors).
I enjoyed peer assesing with my mate Jakob A becuse we are BFFS.
I found it challenging to stay on task becuse we kept being interupted by people talking about tic tok.
Next time I would add more onomatopoeia to my writing.
Remember I did'int need to write the whole story I just needed to write the hook.
Did I hook you in?
My hollering screams drowned everything else out. Blood red pools like squished raspberries formed around me and blood oozed out my forehead. The outcome was chaos. The horrified caregivers were stunned. Tyres screeched outside. I felt costly pain all over. My head nearly killed me!
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