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Hola James, I really enjoyed your Lockdown diary. I agree - sometimes it's tricky only doing 1-2 tasks when you want to do them all. I hope your Mum gets better soon. Your six sentence story is great. It's amzing that you can tell a story in so few sentences. Your 4th sentence is short and works really well. Do you remember when we were learning how to start sentences with adjectives and verbs? Maybe you could try that for some of the other sentences next time. Mā te wā, Mrs Naden
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Hola James,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your Lockdown diary. I agree - sometimes it's tricky only doing 1-2 tasks when you want to do them all. I hope your Mum gets better soon. Your six sentence story is great. It's amzing that you can tell a story in so few sentences. Your 4th sentence is short and works really well. Do you remember when we were learning how to start sentences with adjectives and verbs? Maybe you could try that for some of the other sentences next time.
Mā te wā,
Mrs Naden