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Kia ora James. Phil here from the Poetry Slam team. Thanks for sharing your awesome poem. I like the image you portrayed of the jandals lying in the sun. I see so many left on the beach where I live and often wonder who they belong to! Don't forget to enter your poem into the slam using this form. Then you can head to this site to check out some other students' poems and leave them some comments. Keep up the amazing mahi!
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Mōrena James!
ReplyDeleteChris here from the Summer Learning Journey. It’s nice to meet you! Hope you’ve had a positive week!
Thank you for completing this poetry slam task, it’s even better to see you enjoyed it. What have you been up to with your summer holidays?
Hope you’re enjoying your summer! Looking forward to seeing what you post next!
Ngā mihi,
Chris
Kia ora James. Phil here from the Poetry Slam team. Thanks for sharing your awesome poem. I like the image you portrayed of the jandals lying in the sun. I see so many left on the beach where I live and often wonder who they belong to! Don't forget to enter your poem into the slam using this form. Then you can head to this site to check out some other students' poems and leave them some comments. Keep up the amazing mahi!
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