Smash! On monday I had gracefully dived into the enterprise pool for my last race. it was rapidly throwing me comron and benjamin about. We were racing for the end and then we all lost balance we rolled about for a while then we gained balance. zoom! I could hear the crowd cheering as we were swimming like it was no one's business.
“Freestyle 25 meters come with me,'' Mr H cried. Me and the other racers came to the freezing block. The suspense was killing us beep! The whistle goes we leap into the glimmering water
Back at the block we were getting ready for backstroke. Beep! the whistle went. shhhh! We had pushed off the block with incredible power. We whizzed off like a bullet. It was harder than I had thought and I was thinking “I can do this".
I was feeling so proud of myself. My friends were cheering for me. I had done so well in my first two races now it all came down to these last races. Boom I had shot off like lightning to the other side in first. Next we gracefully flopped into the pool. We were as slow as a tortoise then we slowly crossed the finish line in first. Zoom it was tight I could see my opposition was gaining on me they were one meter away and..
I was feeling so proud of myself. My friends were cheering for me. I had done so well in my first two races now it all came down to these last races. Boom I had shot off like lightning to the other side in first. Next we gracefully flopped into the pool. We were as slow as a tortoise then we slowly crossed the finish line in first. Zoom it was tight I could see my opposition was gaining on me they were one meter away and..
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