Today I was learning use powerful verbs and adverbs
I enjoyed writing my plan
I found it challenging to use my plan to write
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Senior year 5s Beep! “There off to a great start” yelled Miss Tilly. oh hi my name's James I’m racing in my school tryathlon speeding past everyone 5th, 4th, 3rd! I was like a bullet but forgot how long it was soon I was at a slow jog alongside aedan. He had a plan: we would jog to the next flag then go all out, zoom, we race to the finish line, grab our bikes, hanck on our helmets and head off.
I was like a tiger racing off but then. Bump! My bike stops and it takes 5 minutes to get it going again. That puts me last. I speed into 5th and stay there. It’s so painful but I think “I can do this”
Splash! I'm like a fish in the water I speed into 4th. it’s tight me just hanging in there. Bang! Unasie banes into the wall! Letting me take over
Shhhhh! I glide to the end, get out and run to the line “well done james” Miss tilly tells me I came forth and my friend lifts me up and cheers. It was the most painful day of my life but the best.
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